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Dark Night…. 

The cold ,chilly winds that night,

the full charming moon outside,

the fragrance of evil scattered in the air,

the burning goodness in the stars,

the screams of silence wanting to be heard,

the undiscovered mystery of the darkness,

all of it pulled her somewhere,

 a sound of knocking glass, 

 screams so creepy, she heared in the mirror,

the night was ready to wreak vengeance… 

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  9. “the fragrance of evil scattered in the air” the fragrance of evil.. those two words put together.. wow!
    .. I’m typing this comment while I go through your post cause I don’t want to miss the little phrases that blow my mind.. “burning goodness of the starts” Damn shiv! You’ve definitely got a way with your words hun!
    “The night was ready to wreck vengeance” Nailed it there! 👌

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    1. Aha it’s a combo, you’ll find some piece of beauty in all my poetic works, I can’t write without that!😊
      Oh yes! It’s Disney Princes -Rapunzel😍
      She was in tangled, a beautiful dreamer and achiever and also as you said she’s full of innocence💕
      And all most all girls love dolls, so do I😇
      Thank you so much for visiting and commenting💕❄😇

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  15. Such great visualization on this!!! Loved the lines “the screams of silence wanting to be heard,

    the undiscovered mystery of the darkness,”. Very nice! You should think about joining our little group who have all used “The Backside Of The Night” in a poem. Great little community growing up! See Sailorpoet’s blog on The BackSide Of The Night!!
    Cheers

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      1. Sure we are always wanting more great people in our little community! Go to Sailorpoet’s blog and check out his posts on Backside of the Night and you will get what we are doing. What we have done is to try and make a Meme out of the phrase “Backside of the Night” by using this phrase in a poem. We would love for you to join. Sailorpoet is a really great Mentor/Cheerleader and has provided a little history of how things got started. Let him know that you have written a poem using Backside of the night and he will update your post on the log that he is keeping! Then he will let everyone know of your post so everyone can come see and comment. Easy!

        Sailorpoet, DavyD, Singledust, and a number of others have joined. check out their posts.

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