Unending Change… 

It ain’t that hard to live here, 

athough people change faces like seasons,

evil and cruelty has it’s own reasons,

changed faces, changed roads,

but haven’t you heard souls don’t change,

they are unending, 

you are just mesmerised by the charm of the body,I have touched the enduring  soul,

destinations are blurred, the roads are lost,

here I stand waiting, is this a punishment or a curse? 

I lack intentions, in need of hope,

the frozen heart waits for spring,

every tear of mine has an atom of my soul. 

The peace of soul or the undying desire,

I worship my deeds, I was an athiest

but that touch felt like the touch of god,

the touch too was lost forever, 

like the dried flower bloomed from a ray of sun, the love played it’s part and soon it vanished,

stuck in a game of revenge I am, with myself or with universe, 

the song of broken and unbroken trust I hear in loop,

being sorry for all the forgotten promises,

look here loneliness is my companion,

the half written song,

the burried secrets,

like an incomplete novel,

I crave for the end, the completeness, 

my story has become a game of cards,

rains of dreams changed with seasons,

regrets and pain  were all flown away,

somethings are designed to be loved after they are lost,

every single thing you take for granted, will surely play it’s part of revenge,

gambles of money never brought happiness,

though gambles of hearts taught inevitable lessons,

here I stay with nothing to loose,with unwillingness to gain, 
all that I understood is that

change may give pain, it’s bad enough to tear every bit of your flesh,

 leaves the body in thirst of blood,evil or angel ,

bad or good, in this world everything seems to be temporary 

but only  change lives forever…..  

Do comment your thoughts on this piece of writing!  And please accept my apologies if I  haven’t been connected to you for a while as this month is a busy deal, will surely catch up ASAP. Thank you so much😇 for all love &support!Much Love❤


58 Replies to “Unending Change… ”

      1. Aww…. I know it’s really hard coz you get so sentimental, I seriously cried when I left my last school. All for good, god bless you😇You know I don’t like sad emoticons I m very emotion driven so please smile and I just want happy faces my dearest friend😇👍Smile and chill👍😇

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  1. Wow, you truly are one talented writer. I mean, you communicate so well with your readers – appealing to them using vividly brilliant imagery and vastly diversified vocabulary. And your style – Pure Gold. Girl, you are going somewhere.

    Thanks for the post; I enjoyed it. Good Luck.

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    1. Hey! That’s really great to have this feedback. As a writer I truly appreciate this kind of feedback coz not everyone is so clear on commenting. It’s a true pleasure to have you as a reader on my blog. These words mean a lot more than you will ever know! Thank you so much❤!😇

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  2. “stuck in a game of revenge I am, with myself or with universe, 

    the song of broken and unbroken trust I hear in loop,

    being sorry for all the forgotten promises”
    Wow !! These phrases makes so much sense.
    Well written.
    All the best, keep posting.

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  3. Hi Shivee,
    Thanks for following my blog. I just started following yours. I’ve only read your first piece and was already impressed by your talent. You express your thoughts very well, and I can identify with them. Your words ring true and are thought provoking. I look forward to reading more.

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    1. Aww… Glad to have such geniune feedback. I really appreciate your words !❤Thank you so much! It’s such a pleasure to have such a good reader in family!❤😇😍


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