The black clouds were on the head, they covered the sun and marked the threat and rain of grief began,
lightning did happen, and the night came to play, the crowd rushed here &there,
the day I lost my job, and the sky did sigh in grief,
the drops of water hurted me like thorns of hell,
my tears were covered, I was wet in pain &grief,
the shops soon got emptied, doors& windows got closed,
near the station I saw a little girl standing on the road with a red rose,
I saw her smile looking up at sky,
wet she was like me but she giggled lovingly with no worry,
with curosity and dilemma blended in my head, I asked her where did she live,
she giggled again and said “the place where you have kept your feet, that is the ground on which I eat and sleep,”
I asked again what are you doing here in this heavy rain?
with excitment she answered, I m seeing the magic in rain,
What magic was it I asked her again, she replied “the drops changed their colour every now and then,”
I forgot the sorrow when she gifted me a smile,
I questioned that why was she holding a rose in the hand, she answered -I picked it up when a girl dropped it out of furstration and anger in head,
Where will you sleep tonight I asked,
she answered “beneath the magical stars and the beautiful black sky after the magic show ends by”
the conversation with this little genius did not last too long,
it rained and with another strike of lightning
she bounced and danced and dissappeared before I knew,
I felt the joy in the feeling of pain,
I enjoyed the newly explained magical rain,
that angel taught me great things,
the sun sets, the hope doesn’t,
like the evening of summer,
and warmth of sun in winter,
she taught me not to chase love but be love,
I realised that like the sand in a person’s hand this life shall too pass in notime, smoothly and effortlessly no matter how tightly you hold,
a gift not asked was given to me, a ball of love, goodness dripping from her melted the long siezed heart,I wonder a stranger she was or an angel disguised as a litle girl….
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Do comment on this post!😊
Now that you have read so far I just wanted to say that hey, you look awesome today!😊So smile😀
Damn 😍😍 beautifully written 😘
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Thank you so much Harshit!😊✌
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You’re most welcome 😄
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awsm really
please hear my song and like comment it means alot to me thankyou 🙂
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Thank you! Sure!😊
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Yes, very beautifully written ! Thanks for stopping by my page and giving me the opportunity to come by here to see your wonderfully creative writing. 🙂
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Please if you can provide your feedback on my poetry https://thehungoverowls.wordpress.com/2017/06/04/a-broken-kind-of-beautiful/
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✌Yo bro!
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Ah thanks 😘
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Thank you dear! I m really happy that you did visit💟
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I love it😍
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Aw. Thank you so much for love💟😘
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Hey! You look and write awesome as always… Enjoy ur day..
Ur indeed great😉
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Haha! Thank you so much Mr. Lonely😁. Have a great day✌
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Welcome!! I will try 🙂
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This is a beautiful piece. I love the message at the end of it. You are awesome and have a great day!!
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My purpose was to make you smile did you?😀Haha thank you so much dear!😊🌹
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Yes it worked. I did smile. I’m still smiling. You are so welcome my dear.
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Be love great
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Well done my dear! A great poem. ❤
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Thank you so much!💟
Means a lot!😊
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Lovely and beautiful!!! 😊😊❤
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Thank you so much!💟
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Always welcome choti!!😘😘
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You are a real professional and I can learn much from you🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼🙏🏼❤️🍀🍀
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Hey Hati! You made my day😘.
You have no idea how happy I m.
Thank you so much! Many people read my poems but your comments are so deep as if you understand each and every word and feel. Thank you girl you made my day! Stay blessed, stay awesome!✌🌹
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Here I am lying. On the couch… where thinking abt problems and issues I can’t solve and waiting for iftar as I do fasting… then your reply…seriously love you so much for this❤️🍀 pls keep writing I’ll always support you😘😘😘
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This means a lot dear! I love you too dear💟And thank you so much for all the love and support😘💟
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Beautiful Story! I loved it!
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Thank you so much!😊💞
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This is the most beautiful poetry i ve read today..
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That’s a big compliment Thank You!💟
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This was lovely. Really nice.
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Thank you so much for this lovely comment💟
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The girl gave a gift to you and you in turn gave that gift to me. A beautiful story and a wonderful gift. Thank you for sharing.
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Aw. Thank you so much for this beautiful comment!💟😊
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Nice one
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Thank you!💟😊
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Welcome
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You write so beautifully! I love your poems!!!! ❤ I just visited here today, now I love you as a person!
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Aw. I love you too. Means a lot.
Thank you so much!💟😊
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Beautifully written dear. I nominated you for the growing self blogger award and hope it will,send more readers your way. Don’t feel pressured to participate if you don’t want to as I merely just wanted to honor you and your talent. Hugs
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Thank you so much dear! I feel truly blessed to have you in my WP family! I m feeling really honoured for all the praise and the nomination! Its a big thing for me. Thank you so much dear! Means a lot!💟Hugs and lots of love!😘
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You are very welcome and thank you so much for your kind words. You deserve this so much and I’m glad I could help to showcase your talent and hopefully bring more love your way. Hugs
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This was very beautifully written.
And yes, I am already smiling.
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Thank you so much! Glad, mission completed!😁✌💟
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Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaab..really a great one…touched my heart..Soo beautiful
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Thank you so much!💟🌹Means a lot!😁
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Well done!
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Thank you so much!💟
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This is very artistic and beautiful. I love it!
And by the way, thanks for the follow!
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Most welcome!💟
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment!😊💟
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You’re welcome!
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Nicely written.. I had a smile through out the post! Awsome
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Hey! That’s so sweet💞. Thank you so much!💟
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Nice poem and I especially liked the message at the end ~ Big smile 🙂
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Aw. Thank you so much!😁
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Shivee ❤🌸🌸🌸😍😍😍😍😍😍
Kesi hain tu?
Bahut accha post hain. 😊
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Aha😍Bhai
How are you?Longtime..✌
Before that yeah I m fine😃
Did you like the post? Thank you so much!😍😘
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Shiveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Yaar kitta miss kiya teko. Huh 😦
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Beautiful ❤️
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Heya! Longtime.🙋
How are you?😊And thank you so much!💞😇
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I’m fine. 😁
How are you?
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I m good.😊💟
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Beautifully written…
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Thank you!💞💞
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Sure to comment!
Such loveliness and beauty in verse…
Wisdom in lines!!
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Thank you so much! Grateful!😊
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Reblogged this on Celebrity Platform.
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I enjoyed reading that… Excellent story…
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Thank you so much!💞💞
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This is so beautiful 😍
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Thank you!💟🌹
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Beautiful !!
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Thank you!
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Aw… Bhai ya😥😭Ab aagai na main I missed you too😘, I actually was not that active.But nowonwards I think I will be active😅😘BTW how are you? Maja ma?😋
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Beautifully written!! One can almost feel the emotions running down the nerve 😀.
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Hey! Thank you!❤
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bahut hi behtarin likha hai apne bahut khub
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Thank you!😊
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hey Shivee nominated you for an award 🙂
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A beautiful poem to end the day.Lovely
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Hey, that’s really sweet! Thank you!❤
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Beautifully written .👌
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Thank you!
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My pleasure 👍
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Lovely, so beautiful 😍😊😊
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Thank you so much,and hey welcome to my WP family and my blog! Hope you enjoyed the read!❤
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Very well written
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Thank you so much!❤
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Its really beautiful…. Lovely!!
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Beautiful!!!!
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Thank you so much!❤
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Very nicely expressed! hugs 😊
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Aw! Thanks girl❤Hugs back😘
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Great messages
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Thank you!
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