The cold ,chilly winds that night,
the full charming moon outside,
the fragrance of evil scattered in the air,
the burning goodness in the stars,
the screams of silence wanting to be heard,
the undiscovered mystery of the darkness,
all of it pulled her somewhere,
a sound of knocking glass,
screams so creepy, she heared in the mirror,
the night was ready to wreak vengeance…
Last line gives a good feeling! 😄
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does it?😅 Thank you😇😇❄
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Yes it does!!😄
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Ah, I m glad thank you😁😇❄
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Haha tons of welcome!!!😜😘🙂
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haha,😂😅😂😂
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😄
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Awesome poetry. There is something special about your way of writing😊 Superb👍
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Thank you so much😇❄a really wonderful comment was it💞thank you!!😇😇😇
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simply amazing 👍👌
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Thank you so much😇❄💞
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👌😄😄
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Beautiful so brilliantly composed Shivee I got chills running down my spine. A great 👍 picture that was so apt with your poem. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Thank you so much di❤😇❤…So glad to seek such comment😇❄
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Welcome Shivee the poem was so beautifully penned. Keep it up.😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Thanks a million di😘😘💞😇I m so glad that you liked it😇
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Yes dear.👌👌👌👌👌👌
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😇😇😇💞
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This is just awesome!
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Thank you😇
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Really beautifull .
the screams of silence wanting to be heard ( This line is really awsome 🙂 ..love it
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❤Thank you so much Akhzar😇😇😇
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Welcome
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Beautifully written. 👌🏼
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Thank you so much😇😇😇longtime✌❄
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Welcome.. 😊 Longtime? 😐😐
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I mean your comment after a longtime😅
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Oh yeah. I haven’t liked or commented on your posts from a longtime. 😁 I wasn’t here.
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Yeah maybe I knew that😇glad to see u back😊
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Thanks 😁 Although I still won’t post a lot.
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Me too bro… completely depends on when you feel to post😊
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Bro…. Nahiiii… 😂😂😂😂
Just kidding. 😛
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Hahahahahah …..OMG …😂😂😂😂that was so hilarious 😂
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😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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Beautiful imagery!
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Thank you so much😇😇💞😍
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“the fragrance of evil scattered in the air” the fragrance of evil.. those two words put together.. wow!
.. I’m typing this comment while I go through your post cause I don’t want to miss the little phrases that blow my mind.. “burning goodness of the starts” Damn shiv! You’ve definitely got a way with your words hun!
“The night was ready to wreck vengeance” Nailed it there! 👌
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Thank you so much❄😇😇I m soooo happy to see your lovely comment😍💞😇😘😘thank you!!!!😊😇❄
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Much love Shiv! ✌ was delighted to see such a lovely post from you! Keep writing sugarplum!
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😍😘😘😇❄❤
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Superb poetry !!
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Thank you so much😇😇😇❄
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Yeh night is ready 😍😍😍😍
Lovely poem Shivee. 😘😍❤
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Thank you, thank you😍💞😇✌
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💓❤☺
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😇💞❤
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Good morning Shivee.
Maza karje aakha diwas. 😚☺😘😇
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You too bhai have a great day😍😇
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🙂
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This was beautiful poetry!
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Thank you so much💞❄
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❤❤❤❤
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❤❤❤❤
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Is this poem meant to be both beautiful and scary 🙂
Why is your profile picture doll like?you love dolls a lot for its innocence shivee?
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Aha it’s a combo, you’ll find some piece of beauty in all my poetic works, I can’t write without that!😊
Oh yes! It’s Disney Princes -Rapunzel😍
She was in tangled, a beautiful dreamer and achiever and also as you said she’s full of innocence💕
And all most all girls love dolls, so do I😇
Thank you so much for visiting and commenting💕❄😇
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your reply looks like a garden of smileys 🙂
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Haha, such a sweet comment😇I love emotions💕❄
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Such great visualization on this!!! Loved the lines “the screams of silence wanting to be heard,
the undiscovered mystery of the darkness,”. Very nice! You should think about joining our little group who have all used “The Backside Of The Night” in a poem. Great little community growing up! See Sailorpoet’s blog on The BackSide Of The Night!!
Cheers
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Hey Thank you so much! Could you tell me more about your little group and how can i join it😊
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Sure we are always wanting more great people in our little community! Go to Sailorpoet’s blog and check out his posts on Backside of the Night and you will get what we are doing. What we have done is to try and make a Meme out of the phrase “Backside of the Night” by using this phrase in a poem. We would love for you to join. Sailorpoet is a really great Mentor/Cheerleader and has provided a little history of how things got started. Let him know that you have written a poem using Backside of the night and he will update your post on the log that he is keeping! Then he will let everyone know of your post so everyone can come see and comment. Easy!
Sailorpoet, DavyD, Singledust, and a number of others have joined. check out their posts.
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Everything is very open with a very clear clarification of the issues. It was really informative. Your site is very helpful. Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you,!
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Beautiful poem ❤
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Thank you❤
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very good put up, i actually love this website, carry on it
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👍Thank you!
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