Somewhere maybe I m still with you,
I know you don’t realize, the words that criticize will disappear,
I know you don’t have arms you can run into and cry out all the pain,
I know you crave for a hug that comforts all the pain ,
I know you close the doors and weep, so loud you scream in your head, it aches in each bit of your flesh,
I know you have been strong for long and pretended to be happy since forever,
and once more like everyone says I won’t tell you to get up quickly again when you fall,
I suggest you to stay there, feel the pain, accept it coz not everything will always be alright, coz the life needs to get divided into day and night,
I know long you have fought and again and again you were hurt, your heart was burnt but still you survived, for this reason give some place to pride,
let tears flow down through those cheeks, whose dimples made me think of world’s sweetest things,
scream when alone, cry it out coz when tears get revealed they’ll laugh with a feel of excite,
I won’t tell you to smile back and that someday it will be okay, coz honesty I don’t know when is that day,
just stay there fallen until your tears dry and the morning gives you strength to awake and walk again with courage knowing that you’ll fall again,
I know that your heart was not broken it was burnt, but trust me someday you’ll know the value of the lessons you have learnt,
I know I m not there to hold your hand and pull you up and hug you tight and lie to you that its gonna be alright,
you have no idea what is the power of your smile, but just look into the mirror when your eyes are full of tears and then show some courage and smile you’ll know the reason why I tell that your smile can end the wars and convert stone of sadness into happinness like gold,
suffocation in the emptiness of air, loneliness in grief and despair, these are darker shades of life I know you had never seen,
you get up and you fall, and again it repeats and repeats and every time your heart beats its the same rythm of sigh, in the fear what could possibly come next?
in this world no matter how much they hate you, somewhere somehow you are wanted and loved and maybe even missed by someone, maybe a little less but always more than none,lets not talk about hope and positivity and strength, because deep inside your heart you know they’ll always remain words until they are felt,
they tell you there is always a hope and there is a hand which will magically come to help, let me tell you something you won’t get up until you really want to,
give yourself sometime maybe because you have forgotten that time was always yours and start again with embracing those imperfect flaws,
you rule over you, nobody else but you get to decide who are you, the answer of that how are you does not always needs to be fine,
because in a poem not every word does rhym, then how would everyday be same?
it would be as boring as repeating the same level of a game,
here’s a little secret to the brave person fallen apart, whose strength and hope are scattered around, who has tangled all those relationships and bounds, whose heart is full of wounds,
I won’t tell you to get up, if you want to you can stay there but whenvever you make up your mind just remember at the end what matters is you, if you want to you can start it all new, or fix those old mistakes with a little effort or two but just remember all that matters at the end is you!
It’s heart touching though real. Loved reading it 💝😘
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Thanks sweetie, means a lot👍😍Much love, xoxo!❤
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suffocation in the emptiness of air, loneliness in grief and despair,..
I loved reading that shivee!!
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Thanks bhaiya means a lot to me and I loved reading the comment❤!😊
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Hey sis. Most welcome keep up writing. Yours post are truly amazing.
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Thank you, thats really encouraging👍😊
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Most welcome 🙂
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I was moved by this. So good it hurts 💔 I tweeted so much about this, it’s so gooood!
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OMG👍Honestly, your comment is so gooood❤Thank you so much, new on my blog? Hope to see you around often❤welcome!😍
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You’re welcome and oh, yeah I love your blog so you can expect me to subscribe here 😊
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This is gold! I love it so much, could relate to it so much.. It’s almost like looking myself in the mirror. Brutally honest. Absolutely love it. Keep up the good work shivee. You’re highly talented! Much love ♡
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You just turned a rough day into a happy day or maybe happy night! Thanks for everything! You made my day girl!😍Thank you so much may god bless you, wishing you a happy good night❤
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Haha… Keep smiling always. Trust me, good times of bad. This too shall pass!
Goodnight shivi, sleep tight, don’t let the bed bugs bite.. Haha ❤😘
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❤😍😍
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This was so nice! I felt, it was to oneself… So motivational and honest.. I’m moved and I loved it!!! You are a mature writer Choti!!! 😊😊
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OMG! Now that was a big compliment di❤Thank you so much means a lot😍
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You’re always welcome Choti!!!!! ❤❤
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❤❤❤
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Wonderful…an intriguing post…
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Thank you so much!👍😊
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Welcome
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Amazing post. Thought provoking. 🙂
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Thank you so much, longtime! How are you?❤
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I am fine dear. wbu?
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That’s beautiful
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Thank you so much! Means a lot❤
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OMG OMG OMG!! I loved this. I fucking love this. This is so beautiufl. I love it. It’s so good to see you again. I’ve missed your posts!!
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That’s so sweet! Thanks a ton! It means a lot coming from you, much love❤I too have missed posting and replying to comment of yours but yeah I will try and be regular❤😘
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You’re welcome. Much love right back to you. I would love that. I’ve missed you. Hope things are going well for you.
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I missed you too, I m fine all ups and downs but yeah I m good. Hope you are good too..👍
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I’m glad to hear that you are doing well. I’m sorry for the all ups and downs. I’m doing good. I’ve had a lot of ups and downs lately myself, but I’m good. I’m tired.
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Awesomest… If that was the word…
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Thank you so much for the awesomest comment from the awesomest person, haha if awesomest was a word😂👍😊
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Aww.. thank you…😊
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Welcome!
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U too welcome 😂
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Soo long..soo motivating..and exceptionally written well
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Thank youuu😍 for kind words of encouragement! Means a lot❤👍😊
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Expecting much more from you shivee..I think it’s not your original name..am I right
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Thank you! And yes this is my nickname I m a mystery blogger maybe anyway what’s in a name? That which you call rose by any other name would smell as sweet, I think its same with me. But this is who I am at heart❤
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Ok…sounds good….hope you are not alien disguised in human
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Haha! Actually I never thought of alien point of view come on yaa use more beautiful words such as fairy or angel disguised as human, sorry I m annoyingly poetic at times😛
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Yaa..but I may lose control and may flirt with you when I start Calling you sweet names
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Hahaha! OmG I seriously like honest people! That’s what my friends and family call me so I m habitual , and flirting ummm a lil won’t hurt .all day I meet tones of people and trust me name doesn’t matter but I just hope that you don’t loose the control or else maybe its fine coz almost everyone does😂
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Yeah…even there is fellow blogger named moushmi radhanpara ..I always flirts with her..even today we chatted in twitter,she is keeping condition to chat with me..that condition is ” Don’t flirt” because I flirt her always for fun…she also little flirting is nice..but I do flirting in excessively doses..Though I haven’t seen her..I like to make girls smile or tease in some way or other until they won’t feel uncomfortable…
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Ummm… Basically you can do 4things when someone flirts, 1st flirt back, 2nd ignore or don’t respond, 3rd tell person to stop flirting, 4th change the topic.I think one should be honest if its uncomfortable you tell that’s all, and I never understood what boys or men say verses what they actually mean and how they take hints we never give, anyway lets chill yaa all cool if there’s a problem I’ll tell, I just don’t like complications between two humans, so breathin breath out such a beautiful day!🌸
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It’s not about giving hints..actually I do flirting sitting behind walls of mobile..because if something unusual happened,girls can’t beat me..soo it safe..and I never flirted with even one Girl in my life in real situation…For me it’s just to make friendly conversation..flirting I know..But it’s a teenage disease I have got recently..and it’s spreading my mind..I don’t think I Will stop now..anyways I didn’t see you..soo how can I flirt? But still I will flirt using my imagination and creativity..if it doesn’t impress you I can include in some poetical post atleast…
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😂😂Oh god seriously you are such an ideal best friend for a girl, I tell you keep this honest attitude it will help you impress people, wait what’s your age?Hey imaginations haha,,😂dude seriously😂😂lets close the topic my mind is full of thoughts I shouldnt be thinking about, ya your last post was awesome alls good if in limit.
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But I don’t have any friends in girls..you are even talking about best friend in girl..imaginations..? What imaginations?? Seriously I am not handsome,and I am scared to tell my age..what if you are elder than me..I can’t flirt you then( though I don’t bother age!!!!!) Hmmm..soo you tell me your age first
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Haha, I m14 you might be knowing, I m the youngest person I have known here now tell me am I elder coz I m curious, age doesn’t bother you anyway😂not imaginations real life best friend, smart girls don’t choose their best friends by looks.
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Which world do you live in dude we have known everything before we should, adults have no idea how it goes into a teenagers life, seriously no matter how much you think you understand us guys our age would flirt triple the times you can imagine , yeah now that’s like a good boy , so how about calling me your sis? I think it works better!
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Mmm… why are adults so serious man you can keep it messed up ya chill, everything doesn’t need to get labeled do what you feel like and relax life is short .
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Ufff..I am adult..you are treating me like a old man…in that case can we chat somewhere other than here…??? Only if you are comfortable..otherwise ..you know the answer
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I m a mystery blogger, I don’t do social media shit so yeah here or nowhere
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Soo this is my only way to get moksha from mystery girl…that’s fine……Enemies girl
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don’t you think you should call me sis and our long conversation didn’t make sense, gtg!😎
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Exaggeration ….dude you seriously need to read some john green books you’ll know how our life actually works
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Ok…..Reading book is better than speaking with person who already read those books..we can learn whole knowledge in short span
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Wow great! I can’t explain how he does, trust me you’ll love his books and you’ll know what actually life is like for us, once you pick john greens book and start reading you would want to read it all at once, his ya are like mirror to me, at times. Anyway see you, gtg!
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Ok..as you are my mirror..can I talk with my image or attempt see my own image?? ( nice try know)
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Hahah! Seriously? I m speechless dude you can do whole lot better with words, trust me.
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Sooo after this lot of hardwork through words..still is there any chance to get little luck to talk to my image other than WordPress?? ( one more try) yeah..trying is free of tax..soo I am trying
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Don’t try here dude 1st reason because people have tried so many better lines that I m exhausted, 2nd I just have a habit of acting oversmart at times so just chill don’t try, I m a lot more than your imaginations can tell you, and clearly not interested buy yeah I wish government launches tax on trying these kinda things.
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I am trying because of two reasons 1.not about flirting not about seeing your soo called beauty,I just want to explore and know more things,because everyone is different..2. As I am impressed with u already,and you said you are more than my imagination,now I am more curious to chat because you are more than what I think..oh my god..are you writing exams a lot..what’s this writing everything in points like writing exams for marks..typical school student
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My so called beauty? I swear if you were infront of me na, ymuh let go. Haha, yes I have a habit of doing that I actually write a lot so in my exam paper also teacher says you can write a lil less and still get that marks, ya my friend also told me that I actually start explaining things in points, side effect today I had my social studies exams so I think thats why!
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Yeah..it’s clearly evident…god bless your future bf…you will become principal to him..what if you guys had break up??? Believe me your chat can be printed and made to a book..named fault in our bloody stars part two…you will type that much for him when you argue
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I rather forgive than argue in love for no matter how wrong your love is it is always right, how do you know I m single?😂Just kidding I m single only. Smart people ignore or accept or forgive, arguing is mark of foolishness. Yeah I wish to write a book though but not the one you told😂
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More than boys,many girls want to write books..I have seen many aspiring female writers here..and love ..yeah..you will be definitely single for long time..to meet your thinking..may be more than thinking its like more spiritual connect you like to have with your partner. Soo it takes time..soo you will be next John Green..at be change the color green..shivee red
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Haha, no I would go for pink, I m a sassy girl. I read a lot maybe also I have never thought of love as bf_gf shit. Its more than that na, anyway I liked your idea dude.
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More than that?? Can you explain little more about” more than that” how do you love..and how do select your soul mate..or do you think…there is no need of selecting bf….because love selects two people..and however imperfect they are love make them stick together????
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There’s nothing such as two people are meant to be together and jodiyaan uparwaala banata hai kinda thing, at initial stage two people don’t fall in love they decide to fall in love, love might just happen but I rather call it infatuation, when two people can bear each other happily for entire life I think that is love and that feeling is very dense but then love’s second stage is like deepest things you’ll ever experience reminds me of a quote by john green -I fell in love like you fall asleep-slowly and all at once.
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I watched fault in our stars…
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Yeah, now you know what I m talking about, but in that characters were a lil bit older it is more like that you know many of his other books characters are even younger, his books are like tv in head!
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His books are like tv..soo where is remote and electricity?? His words ??
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Arey tv in head ,dude give space to imagination, its so well narrated that you think of it as if its happening for real.
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I know it ..14 year wengie girl..I think after 25 years you may be more matured and even speaks to souls and aliens..because your perception of inner person will increase to damn heights
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Haha! How do you know that dude? Haha😂I have no such plans but yeah not intrested in aliens but would love to speak to souls(goodones).
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It’s called updating iN MODERN WORLD.have you watched movie LUCY…when brain capacity increase..what will you do?? Brain is just a tool…when you really want to speak to souls..you have to remember that you are packed with a body around soul
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It’s OK…don’t give..you are still a minor atleast based on your birth..soo lets chat here only…why take risk?? Because risk actually is to me
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Hahahaha😂😂😂😂👍👏👏👏Proud man proud, atleast based on your birth😂True it is you see how far sighted I am😎
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Yeah…it’s like inserting 64 gb memory card in normal dabba mobiles which have capacity just 4gb…I think you are indigo child..
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My dad said that when he read my first poem, indigo child, I think I should think over it
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Yeah..actually two days back I read on internet..and I doubt I am also indigo child..with certain kind of indigo aura..
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Awesome and heart touching poem. Loved it😇😇
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Thank you so much! How are you, longtime!
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I am fine. Was a little busy. How are you doing??
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I m good, yeah I too am busy these days
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OK.. I am busy as I am starting my professional career soon..
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Ohh, that’s a great deal, good luck buddy, all the best👍
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All the best to you too👍👍
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much!❤
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Soo much encouragement! I love it. Yes cry til your heart’s empty of tears, but move on and face life, love, people. So much power in your words.!
Thank you!
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Thank you for your kind words, and yes whatever happens we should move on. I m so glad you liked the post👍❤
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That was excellent! can I please reblog this? I will be waiting patiently for your response.
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Hey, no wait! Sure! I m here, thank you ya this means a lot more than you’ll ever know, thank you!❤
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Are you sure that I can reblog ?
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Why is that so?
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Why do I want to reblog that? Is that your question… Your words are so powerful it reached out to me and it will reach out to a lot of different people
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Why is that so? Actually no, I m sorry but don’t reblog this one.
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Okay no problem…
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Hey, you are my geniune follower okay, and you can reblog without asking, there was just a misunderstanding silly me!😛but you can reblog if you want to👍
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I thought you thought I was trying to take credit for your work and I would never do that to anyone’s Art… I admire your writing deeply.
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Nobody would ever do that actually this post had some issue I was editing it but now you can reblog it, and thank you you mean world to me.
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It’s on my blog right now check it out… Truly appreciate it… Write on! 📄📃📝👍
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👍Thankyou!
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Arey, you just chill dude my stuff is your stuff do whatever you want to, k? All sorted?
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Love it shivee awesome too much feeling in it!
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And you are back!😇How are you? And where were you for such a long time? Thank you so much for your sweet words❤
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I’m Fine😊 How are U?? Couldn’t find the time to write stuff these days…
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Where’s all your time going hun on moon?😂
You know you should be writing, its been longtime and I would love to read and comment, I m good and wassup with you?
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Yea I have been plotting to reach the moon..😂😂 ummm I shall think of something awsome to write then😋 I’m bored n lazy😂😂😂
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Wow, haha that sounds good😁, I am really bored too and lazy yes of course😛
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Awsome😂 I’m lazy to write too!
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You like coffee? have some and start off👍😉
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Yep I do! I shall start😊
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That’s like a good boy👍😁
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😂😂😂😂😂
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I drew something tho
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Wanna show, I think you share it with your followers
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Yea oki
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Ok?Will be waiting or maybe I am getting distracted again, gotta study I have science exam tommorow👍See you around soon😊
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Oh good luck!!!!!!!😊 all the best!!
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Thank you wish me luck for not getting distracted thought😂Hey you know about a game called death trigger I m so much distracted by it
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Nah I would like to try it tho😊 and yea good luck for not getting distracted 😂😂😂👌
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Yeah, your wish worked👍😁
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This is so relatable, Shivee.
Your words are powerful and goes right into the heart. 💕💖
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Aw, Thank you bhai❤Means a lot!
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Liked it very much
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Thank you!❤
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Beautiful writing.Mixed emotions penned here with purity and truth.Nice👍
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Thank you Shayra! Means a lot👍😍
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My pleasure dear😊💝
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#Beautiful_lines
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This is absolutely amazing, and bless you for giving us ‘permission’ to feel how we feel and not how we ‘should’ feel. I address this a lot in my blog. My entire world was turned upside down and it was terrible, and I still feel terrible most days, and I don’t really want to hear ‘give it time’ or ‘smile on the outside and you’ll start to feel it on the inside’, or the countless other ‘pearls of wisdom’ I receive daily. I am just trying to get myself back and some days that is just letting myself cry and be pissed off and hurt. I think that takes just as much courage and strength as trying to smile your way through it…so, thank you.
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True that! Omg! You are so brave! I appreciate your thoughts, this was an amazing feedback, and your words are so similar to what I wrote in one of my post- To a broken person….
Thank you so much, pleasure having you here and welcome to my blog house! Hope to see you around soon!👍Tc! ❤
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So happy to be here! You’re amazing!
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